{"id":9637,"date":"2019-03-04T12:39:51","date_gmt":"2019-03-04T11:39:51","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.masharif.com\/fr\/?p=9637"},"modified":"2019-03-04T12:39:51","modified_gmt":"2019-03-04T11:39:51","slug":"archives-commentaires-poetiques-de-mohamed-salah-ben-amor-27-poemes-de-patricia-royet-27-17-vague-blanche","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.masharif.com\/fr\/2019\/03\/04\/archives-commentaires-poetiques-de-mohamed-salah-ben-amor-27-poemes-de-patricia-royet-27-17-vague-blanche\/","title":{"rendered":"Les archives des commentaires po\u00e9tiques de Mohamed Salah Ben Amor : 27\u2013Les po\u00e8mes de Patricia Royet :27-17 : Vague blanche"},"content":{"rendered":"
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Patricia Royet<\/p><\/div>\n

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Sous mes draps,<\/strong><\/p>\n

J’ai tes mots qui enlacent ma peau,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Sous mes draps\u00a0en f\u00e9erie,<\/strong><\/p>\n

J’ai mes r\u00eaves d’\u00e9claircie,<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

Sous cette mer blanche,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Qui enveloppe mon corps,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Je veux la caresse de tes doigts en vague de tr\u00e9sor,\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

Viens mon amour,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Viens,<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u00c9cume\u00a0 comme un pirate assoiff\u00e9,\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mon corps d\u00e9nud\u00e9,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Caresse ma joue, explore mon cou,<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

Ta voix coule sensuelle dans ma bouche,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Tes\u00a0murmures se consument en fi\u00e8vre\u00a0sur mes l\u00e8vres ardentes,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Ta chair perle\u00a0de gouttes de feu,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Sur ma peau qui crie\u00a0: “Je te veux”,<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mes jambes deviennent tremblantes,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Se tiennent \u00e0 tes hanches,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mon corps danse, chavire,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Quand ta fougue et ton corps inondent\u00a0ma flore,<\/strong><\/p>\n

De va et vient,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Encore et encore,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Jusqu’\u00e0 l’aurore,<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

Et la mer blanche apais\u00e9e,<\/strong><\/p>\n

S’endort sur nos deux corps,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Enlac\u00e9s par le r\u00eave de leur tr\u00e9sor.<\/strong><\/p>\n

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C\u2019est la premi\u00e8re fois que l\u2019auteure de ce po\u00e8me s\u2019abstient \u00a0de partager l\u2019un de ses nouveaux po\u00e8mes sur mon mur .Et ce n\u2019est que par hasard que je l\u2019ai d\u00e9couvert sur le sien. Et sans lui demander, \u00e0 titre amical bien s\u00fbr , \u00a0une explication quelconque , j\u2019ai devin\u00e9 que la sc\u00e8ne \u00e9rotique qu\u2019elle y d\u00e9crit y est \u00a0pour quelque chose .Si j\u2019ai vu juste et au cas o\u00f9 mon flair ne m\u2019a pas tromp\u00e9 ,j\u2019attire l\u2019attention de notre po\u00e9tesse, tout en la remerciant pour son respect pudique, que notre univers de la cr\u00e9ation litt\u00e9raire et artistique n\u2019est r\u00e9gi que par ses propres lois et qu\u2019il \u00a0est totalement ind\u00e9pendant de toutes les autres disciplines surtout la morale et l\u2019id\u00e9ologie qui essaient souvent de s\u2019immiscer dans nos choix et de nous imposer leurs fa\u00e7ons de voir les choses .Ainsi et abstraction faite donc du th\u00e8me abord\u00e9 par notre amie Patricia dans ce po\u00e8me, le c\u00f4t\u00e9 esth\u00e9tique y est tr\u00e8s appr\u00e9ciable et r\u00e9pond amplement aux r\u00e8gles strictes de l\u2019art , \u00e0 commencer par son usage ad\u00e9quat de l\u2019amplification par le biais de laquelle elle a mis en relief les sensations voluptueuses \u00a0que la locutrice \u00e9prouve au cours des \u00e9bats charnels et passionn\u00e9s avec son amoureux , des \u00e9bats que rien ne montre, en r\u00e9alit\u00e9, qu\u2019ils soient effectifs , car dans les treize premiers vers ils ne d\u00e9passent gu\u00e8re, express\u00e9ment, \u00a0le mode du simple souhait (je veux la caresse de tes<\/strong> doigts – viens mon amour, viens, \u00e9cume \u00a0comme un pirate assoiff\u00e9,\u00a0mon corps d\u00e9nud\u00e9,\u00a0caresses ma joue, explore mon cou\u2026<\/strong>etc.) et rien n\u2019emp\u00eache aussi \u00a0que le passage, dans les strophes suivantes, de l\u2019imp\u00e9ratif \u00e0 l\u2019indicatif (\u00a0\u00a0ta voix coule sensuelle dans ma bouche, tes\u00a0murmures se consument en fi\u00e8vre\u00a0sur mes l\u00e8vres ardentes\u00a0<\/strong>) soit une sorte de cafouillage d\u00e9lib\u00e9r\u00e9( donc un subterfuge technique) pour donner l\u2019impression que l\u2019acte relat\u00e9 se passe bien dans la r\u00e9alit\u00e9 .En plus des images emphatiques qui d\u00e9ferlent du d\u00e9but de ce texte jusqu\u2019\u00e0 sa fin et de ce jeu de glissement d\u2019un mode grammatical \u00e0 un autre, le po\u00e8me se distingue par son rythme \u00e9poustouflant et endiabl\u00e9 \u00a0qui tient le r\u00e9cepteur en haleine et lui donne l\u2019envie de lire \u00e0 nouveau.<\/p>\n

Un po\u00e8me r\u00e9ussi Patricia\u00a0!Bravo!<\/p>\n

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  Sous mes draps, J’ai tes mots qui enlacent ma peau, Sous mes draps\u00a0en f\u00e9erie, J’ai mes r\u00eaves d’\u00e9claircie, \u00a0 Sous cette mer blanche, Qui enveloppe mon corps, Je veux la caresse de tes doigts en vague de tr\u00e9sor,\u00a0 \u00a0 Viens mon amour, Viens, \u00c9cume\u00a0 comme un pirate assoiff\u00e9,\u00a0 Mon corps d\u00e9nud\u00e9, Caresse ma joue, …<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":9181,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[8],"tags":[],"yoast_head":"\nLes archives des commentaires po\u00e9tiques de Mohamed Salah Ben Amor : 27\u2013Les po\u00e8mes de Patricia Royet :27-17 : Vague blanche - Culminances<\/title>\n<meta name=\"robots\" content=\"index, follow, max-snippet:-1, max-image-preview:large, max-video-preview:-1\" \/>\n<link rel=\"canonical\" href=\"https:\/\/www.masharif.com\/fr\/2019\/03\/04\/archives-commentaires-poetiques-de-mohamed-salah-ben-amor-27-poemes-de-patricia-royet-27-17-vague-blanche\/\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:locale\" content=\"fr_FR\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:type\" content=\"article\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:title\" content=\"Les archives des commentaires po\u00e9tiques de Mohamed Salah Ben Amor : 27\u2013Les po\u00e8mes de Patricia Royet :27-17 : Vague blanche - 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