{"id":9782,"date":"2019-04-10T10:10:24","date_gmt":"2019-04-10T09:10:24","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.masharif.com\/fr\/?p=9782"},"modified":"2019-04-10T10:10:24","modified_gmt":"2019-04-10T09:10:24","slug":"archives-commentaires-poetiques-de-mohamed-salah-ben-amor-28-poemes-de-najib-bendaoud-28-16un-temps-blanc","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.masharif.com\/fr\/2019\/04\/10\/archives-commentaires-poetiques-de-mohamed-salah-ben-amor-28-poemes-de-najib-bendaoud-28-16un-temps-blanc\/","title":{"rendered":"Les archives des commentaires po\u00e9tiques de Mohamed Salah Ben Amor : 28\u2013Les po\u00e8mes de Najib Bendaoud : 28 \u201316:un temps blanc"},"content":{"rendered":"
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Najib Bendaoud<\/p><\/div>\n

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Des secondes s\u2019\u00e9talent en minutes<\/strong><\/p>\n

Et les minutes s\u2019amplifient en heures<\/strong><\/p>\n

Tout s\u2019attarde dans cette d\u00e9marche<\/strong><\/p>\n

Et mon attente se d\u00e9nude<\/strong><\/p>\n

Et ma passion se vide<\/strong><\/p>\n

De son temps avide<\/strong><\/p>\n

Trop de distance habille mon envie<\/strong><\/p>\n

De toucher ses coins silencieux<\/strong><\/p>\n

Trop de silence rempli ma balade<\/strong><\/p>\n

Morne et sans sens<\/strong><\/p>\n

Ma musique se cache derri\u00e8re un mur<\/strong><\/p>\n

Ma fen\u00eatre se jette fatalement<\/strong><\/p>\n

Dans les bras d\u2019une incertitude morne<\/strong><\/p>\n

Toute ma chambre fatigu\u00e9e<\/strong><\/p>\n

S\u2019emballe po\u00e9tiquement<\/strong><\/p>\n

Dans mon insipide d\u00e9sordre\u00a0\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

Tout mon ventre creux<\/strong><\/p>\n

Raconte son indiff\u00e9rence<\/strong><\/p>\n

Tous mes sables meurent<\/strong><\/p>\n

Au c\u0153ur de ma mer<\/strong><\/p>\n

Tous les bruits joyeux d\u2019autres fois<\/strong><\/p>\n

De ma joie euphorique s\u2019estompent<\/strong><\/p>\n

Et sur mes mots orphelins la nuit tombe<\/strong><\/p>\n

Des sons boiteux encombrent<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mon verre solitaire et tendre<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mes doigts ronronnent un d\u00e9gout<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mes pieds froids se d\u00e9guisent en neige<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mes \u00e9motions se transforment<\/strong><\/p>\n

En accessoires<\/strong><\/p>\n

Peut-\u00eatre pour embellir quelques soirs<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mon chat s\u2019\u00e9tiole<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mon chien s\u2019affaiblit<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mes yeux se fanent \u00a0\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

Et mes r\u00eaves se rident<\/strong><\/p>\n

Et mon voyage se crispe \u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

Plus question d\u2019inviter<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mes terriens amoureux \u00e0 ma f\u00eate<\/strong><\/p>\n

Tout est utopie<\/strong><\/p>\n

Tout est joie avort\u00e9e<\/strong><\/p>\n

Comment pourrais-je alors<\/strong><\/p>\n

Offrir le sublime \u00e0 ton hymne\u00a0?<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mon aube \u00e0 ton aube\u00a0?<\/strong><\/p>\n

Ma rime \u00e0 ton ode\u00a0?<\/strong><\/p>\n

Je te sens partir seule ailleurs<\/strong><\/p>\n

Sans le sonnet de mon r\u00eave<\/strong><\/p>\n

Sans le chant des l\u00e8vres de mes l\u00e8vres\u00a0\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/strong>S\u2019applique impeccablement \u00e0 ce po\u00e8me la notion d\u2019hypogramme\u00a0 telle qu\u2019elle a\u00a0\u00e9t\u00e9 formul\u00e9e par le linguiste fran\u00e7ais Michael Riffaterre(1924 \u2013 2006) \u00a0et selon laquelle\u00a0 un \u00a0texte po\u00e9tique est \u00a0con\u00e7u de telle mani\u00e8re qu\u2019il r\u00e9p\u00e8te , \u00a0sous \u00a0diff\u00e9rentes variantes, un m\u00eame invariant qui est le noyau s\u00e9mantique du texte. Cet invariant , qui est ici clair et net \u00a0, est un \u00e9tat de d\u00e9prime \u00a0prononc\u00e9\u00a0 et tellement profond qu\u2019il a engendr\u00e9 un discours d\u00e9lirant o\u00f9 \u00a0la m\u00eame id\u00e9e ou \u00a0, plus exactement , \u00a0la \u00a0m\u00eame sensation est reprise \u00a0incessamment \u00a0par le sujet \/ auteur \u00a0et de bout en bout mais \u00a0sous \u00a0des\u00a0 formes extr\u00eamement \u00a0vari\u00e9es\u00a0 \u00a0et dont la plupart sont des images \u00a0connotant des changements radicaux \u00a0apparemment brusques \u00a0qui ont fait passer \u00a0 le locuteur d\u2019un \u00e9tat\u00a0 \u00a0resplendissant\u00a0 , florissant et \u00e9quilibr\u00e9 \u00e0 un \u00e9tat terne \u00a0, \u00a0appauvri et\u00a0 d\u00e9pressif ( mon attente se d\u00e9nude\/ \u00a0ma passion se vide de son temps avide \/ ma musique se cache derri\u00e8re un mur\/ ma fen\u00eatre se jette fatalement dans les bras d\u2019une incertitude morne \/ mon chat s\u2019\u00e9tiole \/mon chien s\u2019affaiblit\/ mes yeux se fanent \/\u00a0\u00a0mes r\u00eaves se rident \/ mon voyage se crispe \u2026 <\/strong>).\u00a0 A\u00a0ce grand effort \u00a0tr\u00e8s soutenu au niveau de la m\u00e9taphorisation \u00a0, \u00a0s\u2019ajoutent \u00a0le ton plaintif \u00e9mouvant\u00a0 \u00a0qui accompagne le lecteur\u00a0 tout au long du texte\u00a0 et le rythme effr\u00e9n\u00e9 produit par l\u2019accumulation de phrases \u00a0d\u2019une m\u00eame structure introduites \u00a0par\u00a0 \u00a0l\u2019un des deux possessifs \u00a0“mon ” et \u00a0“ma ” \u00a0et compos\u00e9es d\u2019un syntagme nominal sujet \u00a0\u00a0suivi d\u2019un syntagme verbal \u00e0 verbe pronominal r\u00e9fl\u00e9chi \u00a0. Et le tout a \u00a0contribu\u00e9 \u00a0\u00e0 donner \u00a0un po\u00e8me lyrique de haute tenue artistique, ce \u00a0qui n\u2019est pas \u00e9tonnant de la part d\u2019un po\u00e8te qui s\u2019est sp\u00e9cialis\u00e9 ou presque \u00a0, et \u00a0 depuis longtemps , dans la po\u00e9sie amoureuse \u00a0et dont les \u00e9crits \u00a0sur ce th\u00e8me se caract\u00e9risent par une singularit\u00e9\u00a0 originale\u00a0 puis\u00e9e g\u00e9n\u00e9ralement dans le patrimoine mystique .<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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