{"id":8164,"date":"2018-05-08T12:30:37","date_gmt":"2018-05-08T11:30:37","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.masharif.com\/fr\/?p=8164"},"modified":"2018-05-08T12:30:37","modified_gmt":"2018-05-08T11:30:37","slug":"archives-commentaires-poetiques-de-mohamed-salah-ben-amor-11-poemes-de-monique-marie-ihry11-2-dun-souffle","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.masharif.com\/fr\/2018\/05\/08\/archives-commentaires-poetiques-de-mohamed-salah-ben-amor-11-poemes-de-monique-marie-ihry11-2-dun-souffle\/","title":{"rendered":"Les archives des commentaires po\u00e9tiques de Mohamed Salah Ben Amor :11 – Les po\u00e8mes de Monique-Marie Ihry:11 -2 : D\u2019un souffle"},"content":{"rendered":"
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Monique-Marie Ihry<\/p><\/div>\n

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Tr\u00e8s las, il s\u2019assoupit dans un souffle serein<\/strong><\/p>\n

Son corps voluptueux reposait sur le drap<\/strong><\/p>\n

De soie rose. Il mettait en valeur son teint<\/strong><\/p>\n

Perle de ros\u00e9e au velours tr\u00e8s d\u00e9licat.<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

J\u2019eus soudain envie de lui offrir un baiser<\/strong><\/p>\n

De caresser ses hanches, son corps d\u00e9sirable<\/strong><\/p>\n

Mais d\u00e9cidai de le laisser se reposer<\/strong><\/p>\n

Sous le regard heureux de mon amour affable.<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

Je veillais sur son repos lorsque vint l\u2019aurore,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Il pencha sur mon c\u0153ur un regard amoureux,<\/strong><\/p>\n

Me couvrit de baisers dont il me pla\u00eet encore<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u00c0 me rem\u00e9morer lorsqu\u2019en mon c\u0153ur il pleut\u2026<\/strong><\/p>\n

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Extrait du recueil de po\u00e9sie\u00a0D\u00e9lices<\/em><\/strong>, \u00c9ditions Mille-Po\u00e8tes en M\u00e9diterran\u00e9e, Narbonne, 2013, r\u00e9\u00e9dition juin 2018<\/p>\n

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Dans ce po\u00e8me d\u2019amour, deux remarques retiennent notamment notre attention\u00a0: la premi\u00e8re, au niveau du th\u00e8me, est la diff\u00e9rence \u00e9norme entre le comportement de la femme et celui de l\u2019homme en amour. Cela se voit dans la ma\u00eetrise qu\u2019exerce la locutrice sur son d\u00e9sir lorsque son compagnon est en train de dormir,\u00a0tandis que celui-ci ne se fait pas prier \u00a0pour passer directement \u00e0 l\u2019action et entrer dans le vif du sujet. Freud a expliqu\u00e9 cette diff\u00e9rence par le fait que l\u2019un des caract\u00e8res sp\u00e9cifiques de la nature f\u00e9minine est la r\u00e9ceptivit\u00e9 \u00e0 laquelle il\u00a0 a oppos\u00e9 l\u2019intrusion chez le m\u00e2le. Et de ces deux modes de comportement r\u00e9sulte la compl\u00e9mentarit\u00e9 et l\u2019harmonie entre les deux sexes.<\/p>\n

Au niveau stylistique, ce texte vaut surtout par son rythme \u00a0mental g\u00e9n\u00e9r\u00e9 par cette opposition pertinente entre les comportements des deux partenaires et par le tableau horizontal englobant les deux images de l\u2019homme et des draps, \u00a0bross\u00e9 \u00e0 coups de pinceaux\u00a0\u00a0par le biais d\u2019une description visuelle. D\u2019autre part, une intertextualit\u00e9 minime avec\u00a0 l\u2019un des plus fameux po\u00e8mes de Verlaine \u00a0se fait sentir \u00a0dans le dernier vers \u00ab\u00a0\u00c0 me rem\u00e9morer lorsqu\u2019en mon c\u0153ur il pleut<\/em>\u00a0\u00bb qui\u00a0 me rappelle ces \u00a0deux autres vers de Monique-Marie\u00a0:<\/p>\n

Vous \u00e9tiez beau Monsieur sur le pas de la gare<\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n

Lorsque je vous \u00a0vis un jour\u00a0 au seuil de mon c\u0153ur[1]<\/sup><\/a><\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n

Verlaine avait dit :<\/p>\n

Il pleure dans mon c\u0153ur \u00a0<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n

Comme il pleut sur la ville
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Artistiquement parlant, ce po\u00e8me est un vrai bijou !<\/p>\n

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[1]<\/a>\u00a0Rendez-vous manqu\u00e9s<\/em>, IchraQ \u00c9ditions, 2011, p. 17.<\/p>\n

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